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Pretense

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I am not what I pretend to be...

Light study with apple and pear. I really need to practice on light settings...

It's kinda strange maybe but I hope you like it. :)
Image size
2840x3608px 1.81 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1100D
Shutter Speed
1/10 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
800
Date Taken
Sep 18, 2013, 6:45:24 PM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 III
Sensor Size
15mm
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RenaisAngel's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

So this image has a great impact, when I first saw it I went (ooooo <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> )
However, after that, I found a few things that I will give you a few pointers about...
So first of all, the fuzzy outline of the Apple against the extremely crisp outline of the pear clashes a bit, partly because their shades of dark grey/black are similar. As for technique, it angst me that there is not more room around the pear and apple. It is like there is no elbow room and it makes the image feel a bit restricted. I suggest zooming out a bit and putting the image to the left side for composition. More shading on the images would have been nice to see too.
Even though this is a critique, i must say I do like this image and I'm totally favoriting it! I really like still life photography of fruit and you still did a great job. The image has a feeling of patter to it and the small against the large is also really great <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Good Job XD